Monday, September 27, 2010

my weekend

On Saturday, I went to the movies with Paula and her sister Stacey. We saw Resident  Evil Afterlife. It was a scary movie. We had nachos and I had candy. I had a super wonderful weekend.

On Sunday, I went to Tony's house. I went to Troy's house with Monique and Erika. We talk about doing in school and teenagers stuff. We had some pizza for lunch. I had so much fun on the weekend.

2 comments:

  1. Marcus- Great job capitalizing the first letter of EVERY SENTENCE! Great detail! You used punctuation appropriately.

    What out for TENSE! Use past, present and future tense when writing your verbs!

    We talked about doing things in school and other teenagers stuff.

    You write well, Marcus!

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  2. i liked that you had alot of details in it but it didnt make since in one sentince but u did good

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